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One afternoon I bought a tart for thirty dollars.

Didn't seem like much at the time, just a couple of bills out of my back pocket, for a tart about three-quarters the size of my fist, laden with whipped cream and fresh strawberries.

I popped a strawberry in my mouth and I liked it, so I took another bite. Didn't like the whipped cream so much. Ate the strawberries, the edges of the chocolate pastry, and threw the rest of the tart away.

When I turned around and strolled back home, I felt the sunshine on my face and I thought that this world could do with a little more happiness, this bliss of a bright afternoon, more often.

Then I rounded the corner and saw an old lady. My hands dropped to my sides, out of my pockets. Saw her clear as day, next to the trash can, picking out pieces of cardboard to sell to a recycling centre.

Bright sunshine, brutally bright, shining on a woman with a crooked back and silver hair and a face lined with the weight of the world. Hands weighed with cardboard. It wouldn't earn her much: maybe a dollar, maybe two. Wouldn't amount to thirty.

I stood there that afternoon after spending thirty dollars on a tart I hadn't liked, in the warm sunshine, seeing an old woman digging for her living in a pile of trash—and I thought that the world could do more with a little less of those like me.
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Happy New Year. ^^

*Edit* Featured in the Daily Literature Deviations for January 27th, 2013: [link]

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© Xanthia B., 2013
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*xlntwtch Feb 13, 2013   Writer
May I please use the title here (your work will be featured) for *disrhythmic's "found poetry," all from titles on dA?
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~XanthiaB Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Of course! :D
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=Sammur-amat Jan 30, 2013   General Artist
The world could use more pieces like these :heart:
Congratulations on the DLD, dolly! :clap:
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~XanthiaB Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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=Sammur-amat Feb 1, 2013   General Artist
My pleasure. :heart:
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`HaveTales-WillTell Jan 28, 2013  Professional Writer
Excellent contrast, and an elegant summation. Congratulations on a well-deserved DLD feature.
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~XanthiaB Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. :D
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~GlassShields Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This was really great. Congratulations on the DLD.
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~XanthiaB Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I really appreciate it. :D
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:iconsurreptitiousbloomer:
This is wonderful! Though I wish stories like these appeared more often.
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