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the student

Most people look at him and see a studious young man, dark glasses, diligent eyes; they see crisp uniforms and a practical haircut, shoes polished until they shine. They never see anything else.

They never see the sparkle in those eyes that grow when he speaks of seeing the world; they never understand when he points at a random spot on the map and says, "I want to go there." They never see. They don't want to.

It's not right, maybe, to them. He's a student with dreams that will remain dreams. Nothing more.

the artist

Most people look at her and see a small girl with straggly hair and crooked front teeth; they see squinted eyes and a freckled nose, body rail-thin. They never see anything else.

They never see her smile as she looks at a finished graffiti with the word peace scrawled across; they never hear the delight of her laugh when she sees flowers painted on grey streets devoid of plants.

It's not right, maybe, to them. She's a vandal that sprays color on concrete. Nothing more.

the beggar

Most people look at him and see a kneeling man with grey hair and lined hands; they see ragged clothing and weary eyes, limbs shaking from the cold. They never see anything else.

They never see the amputated leg that he no longer has; they never see the way he painfully, doggedly crosses the street each morning, arms leaning on unstable crutches.

It's not right, maybe, to them. He's a homeless person, too lazy to work. Nothing more.

the sweeper

Most people look at her and see a thick-bodied woman with a broom in her hands; they see hips like barrels and rough fingers, legs too slow to let her sweep a street any quicker. They never see anything else.

They never see the way arthritis tightens her joints as she sweeps the streets on cold mornings; they never see the cleansing chemicals that dry her hands out until they feel like wood.

It's not right, maybe, to them. She's a slow street sweeper, standing in the way. Nothing more.
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beauty is in the eye of the beholder; but equality has no judge.

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© Xanthia B., 2013
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:iconcassiecat7:
This expresses these stereotypes amazingly well. The last two made me feel a little sad ...
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~XanthiaB Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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I really, really love this piece. It reminds me a lot of poetry, with the repetitive format, but it's also very much so prose in the way it describes the images of the people. Basically what I'm getting at is I love it, haha. You did REALLY well. This was an honest pleasure to read.

The one mistake you had was in the description of the artist. Instead of the word peace, it's world peace. I think you meant to put word? If not, ignore this, heh. :)
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~XanthiaB Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. :D
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*SMAdams Jan 30, 2013  Student Writer
A beautiful piece that simply adds depth to the appearance of ordinary. Very nice.
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~XanthiaB Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. :D
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*SMAdams Jan 30, 2013  Student Writer
You are quite welcome!
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*GentlemanAnachronism Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Everybody has a story, and I think this piece pretty much exemplifies that idea. Really nice work :)
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~XanthiaB Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :D
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